I think your photos are so great and really do a good job of telling a story and eliciting emotion. I would continue to stick with the more creative and artistic photos like 1, 2, 3, 5, and 6. Photo 5 was quite boring to me and not as creative as the rest of your work. Photo two you did an especially good job of using light and shadow, and showing the emotion in the subjects eyes. A photo that shows movement may be an interesting addition, perhaps one of you throwing the photos in the trash can might be more aesthetically pleasing than the one of you flicking them off. It would also be interesting if the sequence was more chronological, like at the beginning you are super upset and hurt, in the middle you are burning and throwing away the memories of him and at the end you are getting over him. The shot of you walking over the photos in high heels suggests you are going back out and leaving him behind, finally starting to get over him. You may consider having that as one of your last shots in the sequence to show progression. Overall great job and interesting topic!
Rileigh,
ReplyDeleteI think your photos are so great and really do a good job of telling a story and eliciting emotion. I would continue to stick with the more creative and artistic photos like 1, 2, 3, 5, and 6. Photo 5 was quite boring to me and not as creative as the rest of your work. Photo two you did an especially good job of using light and shadow, and showing the emotion in the subjects eyes. A photo that shows movement may be an interesting addition, perhaps one of you throwing the photos in the trash can might be more aesthetically pleasing than the one of you flicking them off. It would also be interesting if the sequence was more chronological, like at the beginning you are super upset and hurt, in the middle you are burning and throwing away the memories of him and at the end you are getting over him. The shot of you walking over the photos in high heels suggests you are going back out and leaving him behind, finally starting to get over him. You may consider having that as one of your last shots in the sequence to show progression. Overall great job and interesting topic!
Alexandria Graves