Hi Rileigh! First, I really enjoyed how you brought in the previous lessons to this project. The fence in front of your last photo makes it far more interesting than if it were just a photo of the cars. I love that you got a lower angle on the first photo. It creates a very interesting photo and the scene you captured is beautiful. The second photo is a cool idea for the pan motion. I can only imagine how hard it was to hold the camera still at a low shutter speed while swinging and you still managed to capture a solid image! The only critique I have is the slight over exposure at the top of the first photo. I think the exposure of the bright sky pulls the focus away just a little from the beautiful plants and water below. This is something I've been critiqued on and continue to struggle with in my photos. I think that's the only reason I even noticed. Overall, I think you did a fantastic job on this part one of this project and I really enjoyed looking at the rest of your photos on your blog! Great job!
Hi Rileigh!
ReplyDeleteFirst, I really enjoyed how you brought in the previous lessons to this project. The fence in front of your last photo makes it far more interesting than if it were just a photo of the cars. I love that you got a lower angle on the first photo. It creates a very interesting photo and the scene you captured is beautiful.
The second photo is a cool idea for the pan motion. I can only imagine how hard it was to hold the camera still at a low shutter speed while swinging and you still managed to capture a solid image!
The only critique I have is the slight over exposure at the top of the first photo. I think the exposure of the bright sky pulls the focus away just a little from the beautiful plants and water below. This is something I've been critiqued on and continue to struggle with in my photos. I think that's the only reason I even noticed.
Overall, I think you did a fantastic job on this part one of this project and I really enjoyed looking at the rest of your photos on your blog! Great job!